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Today there is a great increase in anti-social behaviorand lack of respect to others.

What are the causes of this?

What measures can be taken to reduce this problem?

 

 

In a world where people tend not to show theirkindness to others and crime committing is getting increasingly popular, itsadverse effects on societies have raised people’s attention.

In this essay, the causes and solutions related willbe discussed.

 

There is a wide range of reasons that contribute tothis problem.

The most obvious one is that the majority of criminalsmay not live in a structured home environment where there is a healthy familyattachment, nor accept quality education. That is tosay, as there is a lack of family affiliation, children from thisbackground find it hard to distinguish the right from the wrong, therefore thereis a higher likelihood/ propensity for them to perpetrate.

The young who are raised by single-parent households, forinstance, are more likely to revenge on societies when they grow up, which hasbeen reported in related research.

Besides, the high unemployment rate in an undevelopedsociety may have some correlation with climbing/ soaring/ antisocial behaviors.

This is because those who are out of jobs cannot makea living, and they tend to perform /behave outrageous wrongdoings, such asonline fraud and stealing, compared to those who are from the economicallybooming area.

 

To stem this negative tide, societies need to actinitiatively to cope with this situation.

The most basic one is that moral courses ought to beadded into compulsory education, so that children can learn how to behave inproper manners and grow up into law-abiding citizens.

In addition, authorities can exert their influence byoffering citizen access to a wide variety of skill courses demanded for theirjob hunting.

For example, some job training courses, such ascomputer literacy, cooking ,or hair cutting skills can facilitate them to findsatisfactory jobs.

This may not only reduce the amount of crimes in certaindistricts, but also improve / boost the employment rate of the whole society.

 

In conclusion, in reality, this problem is unlikely tobe resolved in the short term.

However, it is not insurmountable, and I am convincedthat above measures could be taken to effectively attack the issues at acertain degree.