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0-5 分------ 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。

6-10分 ----- 基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重语言错误。

11-15分 ---- 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。

16-20分 ----- 切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。

21—25分----- 切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。

# 内容简单化

# 结构模式化

# 语言要包装

# 错误要回避

1. Different people have different views on ... Some people think that ..., while others argue that ... 

2. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion. I firmly believe... For another, ... Just think of..., who ...

3.Taking all these factors into consideration, we may safely come to the conclusion that ... Only if ... can we ..., just as the saying goes,...

1.  The recent years have witnessed an unfavorable social phenomenon...

2. After consideration and investigation, we can find three possible reasons for this trend. First of all, ... What’s more, ... In the third place, ...（两点就用on the one hand, on the other hand）

3. It is quite natural that we meet such problems .... As long as the government, universities and students make joint efforts, a sound solution is not faraway.

1.  The recent years have witnessed an unfavorable social phenomenon...

2.The solutions to this problem seem very clear on this occasion. Firstly ... Moreover, ... Last but by not least, ...

3. It is quite natural that we meet such problems .... As long as the government, universities and students make joint efforts, a sound solution is not faraway.

1. 现如今：nowadays-------------

-----In present-day society

-----In this day and age

2.越来越：more and more----------

------be increasingly + adj.,

------be on the rise, 

------the growing number of

3. 认为：think--------

 ---------it is generally believed that  hold, view, argue, maintain, insist,

支持，赞成　advocate, approve of, in favor of, uphold, stand by one's side, agree with

反对　opposite, object to, take the opposite view / think oppositely 

4. 好 ：  good---------------

-------wonderful, fine, nice, 

   of high quality，excellent, 

   pleasing, surprising, agreeable，extraordinary, amazing, miraculous, marvelous，brilliant

5. 多，大：many , big ---------

-----large, huge, a lot of, lots of, plenty of, a great deal of, a number of, an amount of, a great many, a good many, many a, scores of, dozens of, a great quantity of，vast, tremendous, enormous, gigantic

6. 小：small-------

------- diminutive, puny, little, pocket-sized, petite, minute, tiny 

7．高兴，快乐：happy------------

------- delighted, delightful, pleased, pleasing, charmed, pleasant, cheerful, cheering, merry, gratified, glad, gay, agreeable, friendly, content, satisfied, light-hearted, joyful

8. 完全：absolute, unconditional, unlimited, complete, unrestricted, unmixed, perfect, entire

9．全，都：all, whole, entire, complete, perfect, total, the whole number of , unbroken , gross

【语法错误】

（一）句子结构错误

1． 主从句叠置

There are more and more students like（改为liking）to use the computer.

2． 简单句叠置

I like chatting on line very much, （添加so）I go to the net bar almost every weekend.

3． 从句叠置

As is known to all ，that computers play an important role in many fields of our life.

4． 句子成分缺失

If（添加we） work hard, we will surely be successful.

（二）动词错误

1．时态错误

Many people thought that the Internet will（改为would） be more useful in the future. 

2．语态错误

I have（添加been） excited several days at the news that you will come here.

Most of the students satisfy（改为

are satisfied） with the service in the dining hall.