写作素材积累十二:议论话题写作

议论话题类作文

  一、锦囊妙计

    议论文是以议论为主要表达方式的一种体裁,它主要用于剖析事物，论述事理，发表意见，提出主张，作者可以通过摆事实，讲道理，直接表达作者的观点。一些是关于学校或社会存在的某些现象及焦点问题，要求学生表明见解，进行论述。在写议论文时, 应注意以下几点:

 1. 条理要清晰,观点明确。

 2. 注意运用基本的论据来阐明观点,同时切记用5句话表达全文。

 3. 上下文要连接自然,适当运用连词、副词、短语等来衔接句子。

 4. 注意时态,议论文形式还是以现在时为主。

    通常议论文的考试形式大致分为三个方面；

（1）对立观点式；（2）批驳观点式；（3）现象评论式；（话题类）

二、议论文“经典句型”高分tips

原因	1.  A number of factors might contribute to the phenomenon (problem). 2.  The change in ...largely results from the fact that...
比较	1.  The advantage far outweighs the disadvantages. 2.  The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.
批驳	1.  There is really a lot of truth in these statements, but they ignore a more significant fact. 2.  Too much stress placed on ... may lead to ...
后果	1.  … may give rise to a lot of problems. 2.  It will have a profound influence upon...
举例	1.  I am speaking from my experience2.  Such examples might be given easily.
证明	1.  No one can deny the fact that ... 2.  There is sufficient evidence to show that ...
开篇	1. Many nations have been faced with the problem of ... 2. Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic.
结尾	1.  From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that ... 2.  Whether it is good or not /positive or negative, one thing is certain/clear...

三、实战演练及解析

高三学习很紧张，很累，家长经常为了增加孩子的体力，考试考出好成绩，为孩子购买大量的补品。假如你是王明，最近你们班的同学就“高三学生是否需要吃补品来保持健康？”进行讨论，请你根据下文提示，客观地介绍讨论的情况。

不赞同的同学 （60%）	赞同的同学（40%）
1． 增加体重，对健康有害。	1． 高三学生学习紧张，容易感到疲劳。 2． 吃补品可帮助恢复体力。

[写作内容]

文章必须包括所有提示要点，但不要逐条翻译成英语。

[写作要求]

只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。

[评分标准]

句子结构准确，信息内容完整和连贯。

参考词汇：tonic 补品

  Recently we have had a discussion about whether Senior 3 students need take tonics to keep fit / healthy. 60% of the students think it unnecessary for the Senior 3 students to take tonics, because tonics will make them put on more weight, which does harm to their health. Besides, the parents will bring stress / pressure to the Senior 3 students if they pay too much attention to their children’s health by buying tonics. However, 40% of the students hold the opinion that it is easy for the Senior 3 students to fall tired by working hard, so it is necessary to take tonics. What’s more, taking tonics can help to refresh themselves.

 

四、即时练习

假如你是一位导游。通过观察游客的行为变化，说明大众环保意识日益增强。请根据下面表格的中文提示，写一篇短文谈谈此种现象。

几年前某些游客的行为	现在大多数游客的表现
乱扔废物，如塑料袋，罐头盒，废纸等。	随身带走垃圾。
乱刻乱画，攀树摘花。	爱护花木.
在林中吸烟，引起火灾。	林区不吸烟，以防火灾。

[写作内容]

1）请根据以上提示，谈谈这一现象，文章的开头已经给出。

2）文章必须包括所有提示要点，但不要逐条翻译成英语。

[写作要求]

只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。

[评分标准]

句子结构准确，信息内容完整和连贯。

With time going on, there is an increasing tendency that more and more tourists have been paying greater attention to environment protection. However, several years ago, as we know, in the places of interest some tourists threw away rubbish here and there, such as plastic bags, tins, waste paper and so on. Moreover, some of them climbed the trees, picked flowers freely and even marked their names on the plants. What’s worse, some of them lacked the sense of safety and smoked in the forest, by which the forest fire was caused. To our delight / joy / happiness, in the recent years, great changes have taken place among the tourists who will take away rubbish with them when leaving / they leave. What’s more, they care the plants a lot and the smokers don’t smoke in the forest in case it may cause fire / in case of fire.